Susanti Wita Arizona
A320090201
Writing
Summary by Fitri Nurwiyanti
An article in Campus magazine entitled
“Publics Participation for Education” by Miftakhul Khoiri presents the first
school Taman Siswa built by Ki Hajar Dewantara. Between
Taman Siswa and Ki Hajar Dewantara have
Education paradigm is growing in
Indonesia to fulfill the spirit of education these days.
Citizens should get competent education.
Education is responsibility by
government and the side of private sector individual and group. The word “and” is including of “paratactic conjunction
and occurring relationship of addition”
Because of limited cost, the government
opens the opportunity for public to participate and develop business education
such as; building opening schools, courses, or skill education with facilities more
complete and better than government schools. The word “because” is including of hypotactic
conjunction and it is occurring relationship of causality. Then, the word “and,
or” is including paratactic conjunction and it is occurring relationship of
addition.
Supported by complete and good
facilities make this school rather expensive because it also promises the good
management on its education. First,
the word “and” include of paratactic conjunction and it is occurring
relationship of addition. Second, the word “this school” includes of anaphoric
reference, this word means Taman Siswa School. Fourth, the word “because” is
including conjunction that occurring causality. Third, the word “it” includes
of anaphoric reference, this word refers to good facilities of the school
rather expensive. Finally, the word “its education” include of anaphoric
reference, the word “its” refers to the school rather expensive..
Indonesia has pesantren as education
system (Islamic boarding house models). The
word “pesantren and Islamic boarding house models” includes synonymy (lexical
cohesion) because it’s have same meaning.
It is classified into two models: First
Traditional, it does not collect the payment from the students and students can
stay and study freely. The
word “it” include anaphoric reference. The first using, it means pesantren, but
the second using, it is mean First Traditional. Then the word “first” involve
of temporal conjunction because clarify about time. Finally, the word “and”
includes of addition conjunction.
They study about Islamic science for the
sake of individual and public. The
word “they” includes of anaphoric reference because it means class social.
Then, the word “and” includes of addition conjunction.
The traditional pesantren still be one
choice by our society under class social. There
is repetition (lexical conjunction) of “pesantren” word in twice; this
repetition shows the importance of pesantren word.
Second, Modern pesantren collects the
payment of the students because it gives more ability and knowledge for
students. First, the word “second” involve of
temporal conjunction because it is clarify about time. Second, there is
repetition (lexical cohesion) of “pesantren” word in thrice. Third, the word
“because” involve of causal conjunction. Fourth, the word “it” includes of
anaphoric reference and it is referring to Modern pesantren. Finally, the word
“and” includes of addition conjunction.
They do not only study about Islam but
also other sciences like Biology, Mathematic, Economics, Physics, Language and
Art. The word “they” referring to students
and it is involved of anaphoric reference. The word “but also” includes of
addition conjunction.
They are prepared to face the era that
always changes. The word “they” has different meaning
with the first sentence, in here, “they” refers to other sciences and it
includes of anaphoric reference.
Without already realized the friction
that could be happened from motivation of organizer and management of existing
education. The word “organizer” is not complete
because it is should explain who organizer is. It is including of ellipsis
because it is the organizer of education. Then, there is the additional
conjunction “and”.
To get the good with their equipment of
facility they perform forced the citizen get dealing with power of bargain and
faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man children. The word “they” in this sentence have double function:
as anaphoric reference and also cataphoric reference. This word referring to
government and sector individually.
Poor people who have not the purchasing
power to bargain they will lose their formal education. The word “they” has function as anaphoric reference
and it refers to poor people.
Government and private sector
individually and group have big homework to repair their education inspect that
aims on making organization of education. There
is the additional conjunction it this session that is “and”. Then, “their”
refers to poor people education and as anaphoric reference.
I agree with writer who says that about
publics participation for education is importance. The word “I” refers to Fitri and it includes anaphoric
reference. The word “the writer” refers to Miftakhul Khoiri , it includes
synonym(lexical cohesion) because the name of writer is Miftakhul Khoiri.
He say that the education not only
manage by government, but also the society has contribution to build education
together, about how they create good education, both the facilities, system,
and soon. The word “he” is anaphoric reference, it
is referring to Miftakhul Khoiri. Then, there some conjunction in this
sentence. First, the conjunction “but” as additional conjunction. Second, the
conjunction “and, both” is involving elliptical conjunction.
The government should think that all the
society level can enjoy education reasonably. Moreover, to get good education
with equipment of facility they perform to force the citizen get the power of
bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man
children. The “moreover” refers to additional
conjunction. Then, the word “they” includes anaphoric reference and it refers
to the government and sector individually.
I think that the middle society should
optimalize brilliant brain to be able to compete with others. The word “I” refers to Fitri as anaphoric reference.
Then, the word “others" as substitutions and refers to other people.
The writer says that the poor people who
have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education. The word “the writer” is referring to Miftakhul
Khoiri, it includes synonym (lexical cohesion) because it have the same
meaning. Then, the word “they” as anaphoric reference and it refers to poor
people.
I think that this statement is true. The word “I” as anaphoric reference and it is
referring to Fitri.
The government and the private school
should really provide scholarship for the students who have competence to enjoy
education. There is one conjunction in this
sentence that is “and”, it have function as additional conjunction. After that,
there is ellipsis cohesion, we can look the sentence after enjoy education,
this word have meaning of the education these days.